March 2, 2018 | abiding in God, contemplative prayer, God's presence, grace, heart, in-dwelling, poetry, reflection, spirituality
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Summoned to dwell the realm
of a boundless, bottomless keep,
Where arching spires have no feet,
They form a gentle fingered dome
Sheltering her wonderings
– praises and song.
~ He who dwells ~ Whose image
shrouded stays, just beneath a Black
stained skin of precious Pearl,
Enjoins on her a language taught only
by exchange, of His endearing gaze
into the Heart of her cloister.
In case you’re wondering, this poem is about prayer and the heart. The stanzas are separated by different ideas about the heart and what happens there. Do the words “boundless” or “Black” feel relevant to each stanza? Might you have chosen to use some other word instead of “endearing” in the second stanza? Does the poem make anything clear or point to a resolution of any kind?
Other Blogs by Secular Discalced Carmelites:
- Bethany Hang Out – a blog by Shawn Chapman, OCDS. Shawn is a member of the Austin community of Secular Discalced Carmelites. She also writes regularly for ATX Catholic online.
- Elizabeth Explores Writing – a blog by Elizabeth Ogilvie, OCDS. Elizabeth is a Secular Discalced Carmelite of the U.S. Central Province.
- Gray Rising – a blog by Tim Bete, OCDS. Tim is a member of the community of the Secular Discalced Carmelites in Dayton, OH.
- Hearth Cake and a Jug of Water – Mary Bellman, a member of the Dallas OCDS community, sends out a daily Carmelite quotation by e-mail. Send her an email at firstname.lastname@example.org if you would like to be added on her mailing list and receive these Carmelite quotations.
- Illumina, Domine – a blog by Pat Enk, a Secular Discalced Carmelite of the U.S. Central Province.